Love

A love poem about a man propose to his girlfriend.

I took her outside in the middle of the night near the lake,

We saw the moon shining so bright.

I look into her green eyes, as we both cuddle.

Her looks made me smile.

I go on my knees, as I take her hand.

I open the box with a shinny diamond ring, as she stand up.

She smiled at me, when I asked I love you, would you marry me?

She gives me a hug and said yes I would be your wife.

We started to make love until the sunrise is up.

Author's Note

I wish I have a girlfriend right now, so I can get married and have a family. I'm 25 years old and I hate being single. :(

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Reviews

[Star Wolf]

This creates a very positive image of happiness and true love.

[Ruth]

Beautifully written hon, a change for you too:)
I would suggest postponing the horror until you have proposed LMAO
Lovely poem
xx

[The Water Queen]

This poem is sweet. Love always makes the world go round

[FeliciaS (Poetic Prince..]

That is so sweet!

[Aynsley]

This is a really nice poem, very sweet.

[Bandgeek]

That is so beautifil and just filled with romance/

[Tina Kline]

This is very beautiful and very romantic. I love the image in this, two people happy, in love and now about to start a new life together. Very positive and uplifting.

[Ashley.M.E]

This is a lovely piece, and if you ask me most peopel who marry young, usually don't last. You have time, you'll find your love.