I'm Sorry

A poem about a friend made another friend sad and asking her forgiveness.

I’m sorry I made you sad

I didn’t mean to make you mad at me

I hope you forgive me, so we can be friends

It will make me glad to see you smile.

I wish I can take back from what I said.

I would give you gifts.

If you could give me one more chance,

I will make you happy even more.

Please forgive me!

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Frifthor (D^2)]

I have to say you've done well in expanding yourself out of the horror genre, leading into an awful lot of good poetry. I like that you've kept up incorporating songs into your stories and poem (especially since it's a nice remix), as it adds it's own atmosphere to the writing. Good work once again, I look forward to seeing what comes up next.

[Ruth]

A sad write love, forgiveness is needed for us to move on at times, lovely poem
xx

[A.Lee]

People always seem to have a hard time apologizing to one another. Its good when we can have the courage to do so when we're wrong and mend what needs to be mended.

[Senseless whatever]

Very nice poem.Always good to apologize.

[Black Cat Fever]

A nice 'sorry' poem. It's always better to say "I'm sorry" as long as it's not used as a weapon to do all sorts of mean things then thinking "I'm sorry" is going to work every single time.

[Eric Cox]

This is very good, a very kindhearted apology from a friend to a friend.

[Jon]

Nice sounds like I would right lately, I hope she forgived you too bud, freinds should allways stay close, even if they dont see eye to eye with certain things, good job:D

[Star Wolf]

I hope they did make up.

[Tina Kline]

A very nice sincere "I'm sorry." I like this poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime gifts don't bring back contentment. A very interesting poem. Took me many years. I learn to say nothing bad. Better to be quiet then to speak negative. But it is good to seek forgiveness. A excellent poem.
Coyote