The moon hovers

The moon hovers 

with incessant brightness

it's a beautiful lady of space

out for a stroll

across empty sky

                       and I

observe no different 

than I would

a blonde or brunette

pining only for

a celestial sea of stars

to surround her

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing and beautiful dance of words Relic. You allowed the reader to see the stars and feel your thoughts. The wonder of the sky. So beautiful to see and thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Relic]

I appreciate your comment, Coyote. Thank you. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Relic. And Happy New year.

[Chris Shaw]

Visually beautiful Tim, but in the company of a galaxy of stars, even more so. Moonlight walks are quite something. Hope 2023 brings you health and happiness.

Chris

[Relic]

Thank you, Chris. I hope the same for you. :)

[John the Baptist]

Some nights the moon really does remind one of a beautiful woman waiting to be admired. She might even resent the competition of the stars.
PS: Do a spell check on the first word of line 8.

[Relic]

Thank you, John. Will do. :)

[andrew mitchell]

A fine write. The mystique of the moon has held our glance for centuries.

[Relic]

Thank you, andrew. I'm glad you liked it. :)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Well, if you ask out the moon, it's going to be difficult to get her full attention. Because she's always tugging at the sleeve of one ocean or another. ;) I enjoyed this.

[Relic]

lol good way of looking at it, Fabian. Thank you very much for the comment. :)

[Mk.t.g]

Reading this just brought a huge smile on my face. Your writing is such a talent, Relic!
Mk.t.g

[Relic]

I appreciate that, thank you.

[Mk.t.g]

You're Welcome!

[Neville]

quite simply beautiful & I can still feel the corners of my mouth reaching skyward :)

[Relic]

Thank you for your thoughts, Neville. Much appreciated. :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Enchanting and mesmerizing, however could you lose? Truly beautifully penned, Tim. I love it!

[Relic]

Hey Kelly, thanks very much. :)

[willweb]

Beautiful, the maiden of the evening skies and her followers, always a wonderful sight to see. Nicely penned. Your poem is as enchanting as the moon.

[Relic]

That's kind of you to say, willweb, thanks very much.