I give up

I run and I run

where can I hide?

blood gushing from me

I can't take this much longer

I'm to tired to fight

I've been running for so long

I don't know who I am

Why am I doing this?

I give up

I give in

I serender it all

it isn't much further

that I can fall

What do you want?

What ever it is just take it

That's it

you win

Reviews

[ashley]

This is heartbreaking. Such a great write!

[Krista]

This is a really good write as well. I can really relate to so much of your work it brings tears to my eyes to read this. I have ran from so much pain and sadness in my life. I just want to give up all the time now.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is another great write, i can relate to this one... i feel like giving up all the time....

[Scissorhandds4eva<3]

Wow. I can compare to it. It's really good. I promise.

[*Evelen*]

Wow this is an another amazing poem. I can relate to this. To just feel like to give up completely, and run till you forget why you're running. Another poem filled with emotion, and allows the reader to relate to this. Well done.

[bluessadmood]

I run and hide,blood escapes from me,cant take it much longer..
Tired to fight,been running for so long now,need to rest
Tired to fight ,never knew who I am,or what to do
I give up ,give in,I give it all ,cant even fall ever more
whatever you want just take it,and feel like you win..
but I will ever lose,never quit,just take a breath and fight again
We are never quitters,we fight to the last breath..we are always winners
Sometimes its too much to take all thats given us,but we should never let go
We are dreamer and true fighters..we should never submit,never give it up..and laugh to the end
lovely so inspiring write..how you give me so much thoughts..ha ha..