I don't miss you

I don't miss you

Harsh it seems

But true.

~

I don't miss you

I miss our friendship

the things we shared

the way we cared

but sadly you've changed

Those days of friendship

Vanished

When we told eachother everything

Never seen

Having someone there for you

knowing they cared

Is know a feeling that is way to rare

~

I don't miss you

sounds so mean

though I'm sure you'd agree

you probly dont miss me

wich is fine I guess

I just wish you hadn't changed

I wish you were still the same

hah sounds so cliche

But the past is the past

people change

I accept that

Just can't help but want you back

the old you

the one I knew

The One I Miss.

Author's Note

Crappy but honest...

Reviews

[DeathByChoice]

Actually, this is pretty good! A few spelling errors, but nothing that won't get better with time. And I do hope you continue. I can tell you poured your emotions into this, and that is deffinately important for an amazing writer! Keep up the good work!

[samurai212]

I like it hun shush up ;:P

[Miss Coral]

Great piece. There were some grammar/spelling errors, but it is so easy to relate to, and the emotion is so well conveyed that it doesn't really matter.

[Vito XYZ]

Honest is GOOD