The Blessing Remains

Under the spell of a blossom on the sunshine.
Inching closer and closer to the light of lime.
Sublime is the visual of these trying times.
Detractors try to undermine my passionate drive
But the blessing remains that I'm still alive
Always striving to be greater until my demise.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ivory]

This short piece is very motivating . Nothing in life is promised to us, so we must go out there and make something of it. Nicely written piece : )

[NiceTouch]

Thank you for the compliment Ivory! Your right, nothing in life is promised. I greatly appreciate your feedback!