Try!

You floated in
Gracefully like an angel
Face radiant
You took away my breath
I fumbled and mumbled
For lack of what to say
You seemed I swear
To have grown beautiful a hundredfold
More beautiful than when I last
Your unique face saw
Beauty that like wine
Gets refined with age
You are fun to be with
Fun to listen to
Your smile melted my heart
I can't say am in luv with you
That takes time to build
But am willing to try
If you would allow me girl;
Would you please try
A space in your heart find
And give me a try!

Reviews

[Honey54]

AWW HOW LOVELY...I WISH I WOULD GET A POEM LIKE THIS FRM MY BOO :) LOL NICE WORK!

[Mockingbird]

brings to mind a love sonnet. nice words in courting a girl. excellent poem.

[Poppie Mira]

good writting!!!

[❀ Gabriela ..]

This is such a sweet and beautiful poem! Really great job!!

[Thea]

A sweet and lovely poem! This was beautifully penned...Great work again, Ibrahim!
:)))

[Sugar Plum ♥]

very beautiful and gentle like melody poem...I like it much and be optimistic!
~nia~

[$êlvån]

Keep trying:)nyc one.enjoyed it