Flawed

Flawed

A Poem by Ice

You can be distorted and gorgeous,
you can be cracked and ultimately fulfilled;
You can be stitched and sewn with love,
and you can be lost from all of the blood;
You can be shattered and restless,
you can be alone and alienated from your soul....
You can be flawlessly flawed,
and I'll always applaud 
your perfection.
I could see every
thing in your eyes today;
Like a sea of torture when you look my way,
and every time I let you wash into my veins,
I'll always see you as impeccable.
I'll always adore what I see in you,
even when you twitch your words
because the anger rivals with your affections;
You can take air from my lunges,
you can pull me apart with your fingertips;
You can open my chest with an excruciating pain....
Just as long as I can melt to the beginning with you,
just as long as I can writhe with you by my side
staring at me with those immaculate eyes;
You can be flawlessly flawed,
and I'll always applaud 
your perfection.

© 2011 Ice


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This is an excellent write.. x I love it..x

Posted 13 Years Ago


The flow is easy to follow and the words poured into this piece were stunning.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was beautiful. Wonderful write

Posted 13 Years Ago


stunningly poignant and brutally honest, i applaud YOU! great write...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow! This is amazing, beautiful, perfection.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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