If Only I Were Stedfast as a Star

If Only I Were Stedfast as a Star

A Poem by IceDragonOfPluto

This is a rendition of Keats' sonnet, "Bright Star." This is my own work. This poem is dedicated to the very "inspiration" of why I started writing my sonnet sequence.

If only I were stedfast as a star
That shines the skies for all eternity,
I would shine light across the lands afar,
Brightening the world so I could always see
That face Nature painted with fairest skin
And fiery hair that burns me with delight,
Those lusty lips pleading to linger in
To taste my own all through a heated night.
I would forever shine with sweet unrest,
Embracing you with my immortal rays,
Feeling forever your soft, panting breast
Against my own while locked in steady gaze.
I would never stop gazing in your eyes
If I were stedfast as stars in the skies.


© 2011 IceDragonOfPluto

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Simple and perfect with an almost sardonic undertone, well done

Posted 10 Years Ago

I agree with Courtney. A beautiful write.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Such passion shown!

Posted 10 Years Ago

I love this:) perfect..x

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on May 12, 2011
Last Updated on May 12, 2011



My pen name is IceDragonOfPluto. I am a proud Scorpio. I'm dark and dreary but I have many hopes and dreams. I love to read and write poems. My writng style is what you may call Dark Romanticism. I lo.. more..