My Heart Wants You In Its Possession

I think about you yet I just can't say
Just how I feel because I love you so
Much, no words can form to express the way
I love you or how I try to control
The burning flames of passion in my heart
That long for you to ease this weary mind
That has been torn from love and ripped apart,
Then cast into darkness for all of time:
But when I look into your eyes, I feel
My soul has been pulled out of the darkness
And into the world of your love, then sealed
To the pleasures of your magical kiss
That tempts my mind to shout the confession
That my heart wants you in its possession.

 

Reviews

[GridLok]

As ever you pen some memorable lines …
"… the pleasures of your magical kiss
… tempts my mind to shout the confession
… my heart wants you in its possession".

[realmwriter]

Very emotional deep light write!

[Fragilebrokendreams]

So full of motion and do I sense a bit of desperity? Nice touch.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A stirring round of clarity and stable clearness.