Adventures of Drock: Episode 3

"I'll pay 5000 Galactic units for him", said the Mydian in the back. I couldn't help but cringe at the thought of designing weapons for the Mydians, but at the same time, I was rather flattered by his high offer for me. The Gidorian next to him pushed him to the ground saying, "I'll pay 7500 for this man" Gidorians were known for holding gladiator matches between non-Gidor native species, so I would likely be the leader of a gladiator team if I am bought by him. Everyone knows not to mess with a Mydian, as they are ruthless beserkers. The Mydian got up and began to change into his rage form. Everyone knows that when a Mydian rages, someone dies. The mydian let out a roar and thrust his fist into the Gidorian's body, purple blood trickling down as the heap that was once a living thing crashed to the ground. The Mydian turned to the stage, "I'LL OFFER 100000 for this man's service as our weapons analyst!" Nobody dared to challenge the Mydian, as they knew he would kill them. The Randorian who captured me smiled, her green eyes lighting up with delight. "GOING ONCE" It felt like an eternity as she said those words. All I could think about was how horrible it would be working under the Mydians. "GOING TWICE" I wanted to punch her in her pretty face, but based on experience, I knew I couldn't fight a Randorian. Even a girl, as proven by the bruises on my jaw. Randorians are crazy, even when it comes to what they consider 'royal' treatment, as proven by the hickies all over my neck. "SOLD!" The Mydian let out a victory roar, beating his chest. The Randorian walked towards me, running her hand along my torso. "Now that you are no longer my slave, why don't we get some fine Randorian ale once your situated in your new position?" She kissed me on the cheek and let out a toothy grin. I let out a sarcastic smile in reply, saying I'd pass. I knew I made the wrong decision, as her red hair started to flare up and her eyes began to glow, and I didn't know what that meant, but I could only assume that it was the Randorian expression of anger. "NOBODY TURNS DOWN A RANDORIAN!" she screamed with rage. It was at this moment that I hated being right, because next thing I knew, I was flying into a nearby chair after getting my face whacked by her foot. She grabbed my throat and squeezed, "I THOUGHT WE HAD A CONNECTION" I think my smartassery got the best of me, because I asked how she could think bagging me and dragging me into her ship to be sold as a slave could be considered a connection. Tears flew from her cheek, "Do you not understand my culture? Asking out a man is a sign of surrender on Randoria." Her eyes went back to the furious glow, "I GAVE YOU MY HEART AND YOU BROKE IT! SO NOW YOU WILL DIE!" She pulled out her blaster, but before she could shoot, the Mydian ripped her head clean off and threw it to the ground. "You will undergo great punishment for creating affairs that get in the way of the Mydian empire." I tried to explain that I had no idea what just happened as he dragged towards his ship, but he wouldn't listen. "You will die most uncomfortably for breaking the most valued Mydian principle." I then remembered, despite the Mydians having basically no sense of morality, they still hated it when a man plays with a woman's feelings, no matter what race they are.  "Oh s**t" I thought, gulping as I thought about the torture I would now undergo for breaking Mydian law. I then heard blaster shots, and couldn't help but wonder what they were. The Mydian must've heard them too, as he grabbed his laser pike and restrained me, telling me he'd be right back. I watched in awe as a figure in blue armor jumped out and shot the Mydian to death. The figure was definitely humanoid, and told me in a woman's voice, robotized by the suit to come with her. She released me from the restraining device, so I wasn't about to stay here and argue with a free bodyguard with a blaster. I just hope that this army of blue-suited humanoids isn't going to sell me in some kind of other slave trade.

Author's Note

Give me your criticism so I can add your ideas in future episodes

Reviews

[shyla]

i feel as if you showed good expression with emotions of the main character. Many readers love writing that makes them feel some kind of way keep going.

[Iflybyyou]

lol thanks. Is there anything you particularly want to see in upcoming episodes? I'm totally open to ideas, and it's kind of hard to write without an idea to springboard off of.

[shyla]

maybe a fight for something like independence or adding a private background for the characters and or adding characters constantly to make it more mysterious :)

[Iflybyyou]

yeah lol that's actually what I'm going for. I kinda like the gradual reveal kind of thing, because then people will constantly read it looking for more information and beg me to add another episode making things less open and Ambiguous lol. LIke how in the last episode I didn't talk much about what Drock did while on the Randorian ship, but in the next episode the Randorian hottie acts all flirty wirty and I give people random hints like the hicky marks on Drock's neck lol. People love that stuff. Making random jumps and letting the story take unexpected twists. I'll work on the next Episode right away, because even I'm anxious to get the series more developed.

[shyla]

Hey !! I know we dont know eachother but the American Library of Poetry wants to publish me!! I am so stoked yet i have slim to none to tell

[shyla]

you can get published your really great

[Iflybyyou]

lol I don't really care if we know each other. I would flaunt my achievement with others too, it wouldn't matter if I knew them for 2 days or 2 minutes lol. And thanks :) everyone thinks my work is great. 1 of my current subscribers has ADHD and the other is very narrow minded when it comes to writing, so that takes some talent. Congrats on getting published!

[shyla]

thanks ! I have ADHD haha its just a poem not a series though.. lol you have the talent

[Iflybyyou]

yeah lol. Wait until you read all 7 Episodes that are currently out. It's funny because I have no freaking clue how each chapter will turn out. I just write spontaneously, but yet I can somehow make it fit together beautifully. Yeah I have ADHD too. OMG ITS SPREADING! haha jk. ADHD is so common these days though. It's been said that a lot of people get misdiagnosed with ADHD, as research has found a strong correlation between people who have ENP preferences in the mbti and people with actual ADHD. Makes me wonder if I actually am ADHD sometimes, since I am ENTP.

[shyla]

Haha true ohh dang i have ptsd adhd radd and ocd bipolar disorder lmao

[shyla]

i wonder if all these things are actually wrong with me..

[Iflybyyou]

yeah lol well I have Aspergers, but my personality isn't what is usually seen as aspergers. INTJs are your stereotypical Aspies. Bipolar and PTSD have no correlation with personality, ocd has a moderate correlation with a judging preference, and rad sounds like it may have a very weak correlation with preferences for ITP. Based on the contradictory natures of your disorders in terms of personality correlations, it sounds like you probably have most of them.

[shyla]

haha true thx

[Iflybyyou]

lol no problem :p don't feel bad. It doesn't make you any less of a person

[shyla]

i know that lmao im a strong young lady that kicks butt

[Iflybyyou]

lol yeah. I don't view my disorders as setbacks, I view them more as personality quirks that attract cool people and repel the ignorant

[shyla]

true yet i also seem to disregard the people who act sour to me i also tend to keep it to myself
read moretrue yet i also seem to disregard the people who act sour to me i also tend to keep it to myself

[Iflybyyou]

Lol I just don't give a s**t. If people aren't going to accept who I am as a person and not a sweet talker and put in the effort to build a relationship with me, then they aren't worth the trouble. I have like a few good friends who actually accept me for myself rather than a bunch of people that I have to act cool around. I think most people tend to like my uniqueness, even girls, although I haven't met one yet that hasn't lost my interest or whose interest I haven't lost.

[shyla]

same i have few friend yet am kind to many

[Iflybyyou]

yeah lol I have like 3 friends who I actually trust with my life and the rest are acquaintances. My family is alright too, like I trust them, but I don't really get a high from being around them. I have nothing in common with the Fam. They're Baptist, I'm non-denominational. They're conservative, I'm more open to ideas. I consider my friends more my family.

[shyla]

i am nothing like my family so i understand the only family i have are my 2 best friends

[Iflybyyou]

lol yeah I love my family, it's just that I don't relate to them in any way. Probably my bestest best friend is God himself. Got me through some tough times.

[shyla]

I am a christian yet lately have not been permitted to go to church .

[Iflybyyou]

lol you don't need a church to be a Christian. All you need is access to a bible and some Christian friends. I could start you off. I could never have enough Christians to talk to :p

[shyla]

haha i have a bible yet lack the time to read it

[shyla]

school, sports, cleaning, hw, sleep

[Iflybyyou]

Lol well if you have access to the internet, then you can literally look up the biblical take on every topic. I can also answer your questions if you need me to. I've been a christian since I was 7, and I know the bible like the back of my hand.

[shyla]

haha thanks i am at school this is my 6th hour class :b

[Iflybyyou]

Lol thank God I'm out of school :p are you a senior in highschool or something?

[shyla]

junior lol i am a smart person

[Iflybyyou]

Oh wow lol yeah you definitely sound more mature than the average 16-17 year old.

[shyla]

thanks lmao

[Iflybyyou]

Np. Lol I was mature for my age too. I hated being treated my age. I wanted recognition. Now I am 20 and I have that recognition, but it wasn't because I did anything to get it, it was because I had a birthday. That pisses me the f**k off.

[shyla]

lmao im laughing so hard my teacher asked me what happened i simply replied "i farted".

[Iflybyyou]

Lol wtf. What actually did happen that you had to hide?

[shyla]

i was laughing at your comment lmao

[Iflybyyou]

Lol glad I'm so funny xD lol there is a bit of truth behind every comment I make. That's why, because I say stuff no one else has the balls to say. Lol "I farted" though. That's a great way to cover it up if you want to die of embarrassment xD