1st from Eliza's period.

There was a period in my life which was kinda strange for me and a few poems just came out from me naturally and I posted it on the only forum I spend time on. Now I will post my poems here.

I have an illness.

Even dogs won't listen to me,

They run away.

My whining is too sad for them.

I say: "Believe in yourself, Boy, believe in yourself"

But again,

The black hyena

In me

Knows the rest of the song.

If I would have seven hearts,

I would feed this one to wild wolves.

Only one heart would've been left.

Dark smiling shadow

Silently chewing heart shaped object.

The time...

"Darling, help me

I rely only on you.

Please, eat the memories.

You know what to do"

But if our ways cross,

Even after many awakenings

I would have a withdrawals again,

Shut in my room full of pain.

I lie to myself. I lie.

But I believe.

I know and I see, I'm not blind.

But I believe.

It coughing with so childish voice,

Covering mouth with its hand.

It's not time to die.

No.

But sadly

It is

The end.

Author's Note

Please review as you like and also I would like to tell that my first language is not English, but I hope I did well.

Reviews

[Janice Horner]

You have done extremely well! Your poem has many emotions running through it. Enjoyed the read.

[Igor]

Thanks a lot!