I Don't Need A Bullet To Kill A Person.

My knees are scraped up and bleeding,

I've been praying for too long.

My arms are dried up and bruised,

from letting you lay in them for too long.

My mind is going blank,

my heart rate is slowing down.

Why can't I just die?

Why can't I just fade away right now? 

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

oh my god.. this just awakened my sadness.. it's so depressing...
But i love it just the same time. Beautiful.. so heartfelt..
Love can be the destroyer and healer at the same time.

Great write!

[Kaylor Mason]

Love can save . . . and Love can kill

[PaperLife]

I think you just broke my heart. With the same lines and feelings I've thought and felt so many times. And you've taken my soul and plagarized it here. Your words are adequate enough to receive the world. Deathly amazing.

Well done.

[Suicidal Teddybear]

Wow, so hard hittinf in such few words.

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong emotion in the poem. The statement were direct and hard. I like the description. Create a vision of a caged animal with no place to escape. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a sad poem. It was nicely written and I enjoyed it. The last two lines are my favorite. I ask myself those questions a lot, but honestly you don't deserve to die. You're an awesome person and always remember that. Love you. You're one of my best friends. Thanks for sharing! ^^

[Eileen]

Emotional poem, rhyme pattern need to be adjusted though. You rhymed the same words together from 2nd to 4th line, try keeping a pattern if you're going to rhyme. The flow is pretty good until around the end, then it gets a bit chopped up. In general good write.