Even if you can not see it

Btw this is a song i wrote not a story

(Verse 1)

When the stars come out at night,

You can never see them.

Even if you stare at the sea

It’s never that revealing

(Chorus)

Even if you can not see it,

It still inside of you

Even when you don’t believe it,

It can still be true

(Verse 2)

If there’s a fish in the sea

You will never know

If there's a river or stream

You’ll just get stuck in the flow

(Chorus...)

Even if you can not see it,

It still inside of you

Even when you don’t believe it,

It can still be true

 

When there's a bird in the sky

In front of you it will crawl

Every single leaf on a tree

Will always fall

(Chorus...)

Even if you can not see it,

It still inside of you

Even when you don’t believe it,

It can still be true

 

(Quieter and quieter)

Even if you can not see it

Can not see it

See it 

Reviews

[eighwoeifj]

The flow of the poem is a little off, but that's okay, many poems don't have an even flow at all. I like the overall idea of the poem(: