If U

If U

A Poem by Immortal Beloved

IF U TAKE MY SOUL, THEN I'LL B SOULLESS WANDERING THE EARTH 4EVR.


IF U TAKE MY MIND, THEN I'LL B MINDLESS.


IF U TAKE MY HEART, THEN UR TAKING THA ONE THING THAT LETS ME LIVE AND LOVE.


IF U TAKE MY LIFE, THEN I CANT DO ANY OF THOSE THINGS.

© 2009 Immortal Beloved


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Quite simple and yet, gets you thinking. I like it, especially the last line.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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 Added on August 9, 2009

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Immortal Beloved
Immortal Beloved

Manchester, MD



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