Wool Over The Eyes... The Unexpected Prey

 

How can you be so blind

What don't you see?

They are only using you

Why don't you get a God damn clue

They play with your emotions

They probably laugh at your fears

What don't you see?

The signs are all there

 

Please don't disregard my love for you

I love you like I would my sister

That’s why I'm writing this for you!

Please leave that manipulative b*****d

Please think more of yourself

You could get any guy here

Yet you can't see how amazing you are

 

Why can't you see my scars

I know what I'm talking about

I've been there too

Only wanting to be wanted

I wanted the feeling

I needed to be loved

Not a love from a friend

But the love of a man

 

How can you be so blind

What can't you see?

They are only manipulating you

Why can't you see the many f*****g clues

They never come when they say

For f**k sakes you have never met

You lied to me about that

And can't you see

When you lie something's wrong

And that something isn't me...

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

Strong and empowered! I liked it! Shows that you had the strength to realize that all of the issues where his, and that what he tried to make you feel was not real.

Great Write!

[James Mayfield]

It's always hard to see somebody you care about making bad decisions no matter how much you try to convince them. It took years before my fiance shed the scales from her eyes and saw that her ex-husband was a horrible person. I hope things turn out well.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks for sharing Wonderfully written and very well expressed write~Fran Marie

[C.J.Rohl]

your writing style seems to be similar to mine...i can relate to your feelings toward someone you cae for

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Damn! I kinda saw it as an incredible rant about the Self, really. You see all of the signs, every one of them...passing by, yet, taking chances, risks, and then in the end, problems occur Every Single Time. Yea, I've been there, many, many-a times. Yet, im still learning hehe. That's why im so very cautious these days. You never know whats going to happen, so it's best to just leave it alone for awhile, and do things step by step, as there is no rush in anything. Awesome write!

Mikey

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

I've been there. Nothing is worth a broken heart over.


Great write for your friend