Say Your Goodbyes

 

You ask me why

I answer you

You simply have no clue

 

Look at me

The tears start to form

I want to flee

Just leave me be

 

See these tears

Hear my words

Look at my scars

Open your damn eyes!

 

Can you see them now?

Do you see my pain?

Look into my eyes

Now please just say your goodbyes...

Reviews

[Haley-Daniel Belair]

To look into another's eyes is to look into their soul. It is said the eyes are the widow to the soul. Most people can not look into another's eyes, for they fear that what is reflected.

They see their own fears...so they do not look.
They hear their own words...so they do not listen.
They feel their own pain...and the scars return.

You have written what you feel and that takes courage.
Congratulations! Well done!

[Baby Boy]

I can really feel this poem ggurl and it's so amazing what you can tell by looking in someone's eyes! Your words paint a picture and it was an thought provoking write to say the least! Great job sweetie! Keep these coming! :) One luv gurl!


-JC-

[None]

This reads so perfectly and is packed with deep emotion (no kidding, one might say) I felt the pain and I know that feeling when someone just isn't getting it. Maybe they don't want to face the facts, or possibly they are just stuck on their own agenda and wants. Your poem is undeniably painful and extremely well written.

[a Messenger]

Powerful emotion beautifully expressed.
A very good write.

[Wolfwind Words]

Powerfull, wishing they could understand whats inside, but they never really do, then its all to much, and you just want them to go.
Good Write!

[Sarajane]

like the reiveiw below mine, eyes are the window to the soul. i really like how this reads, and how simply everything is said, but it still makes me think. Very honest, which i love. great write, it seems pretty familar to how iv felt before also. Awsome peice! thanks for ur previouse reveiw!

Sj

[Fran Marie]

Deep emotions well expressed and well penned~THanks for sharing~Fran

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Wonderfully written, and filled with emotion. Nicely Done.


Great Write.