Falling Like A Star

Keeping my faith

Saving from grace

Falling like the devil into this mindless hole

 

Falling like a star

Shining like a velvet sky

Beautiful and kind

 

Seeing your face

A smile on my face

You can’t see

 

You speak to me

But you can see inside me

The passion that fills me

 

Crazy about you

Until the end of times

Loving you behind closed hearts

 

I watch you walk away

Feeling like a shining star

Lost in the ways of a crazy heart

 

Falling like a star

Shining like a velvet sky

Beautiful and kind

 

 

Written: Thursday, December 18, 2008

Reviews

[Jason Young]

The rhythm is awkward, but I like the effect. Personally, I find it sort of difficult to figure out what you're trying to get across, but that's perfectly alright. Poetry doesn't have to make sense.

Merry Christmas from your friendly neighborhood author!