Life - A Haiku

This is just a quick haiku I came up with while sitting in class.

Life is poetic
with each breath you come closer
and closer to death

© 2014 Infinitedreamer

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Elwyn

Not going to lie, I USUALLY hate haikus because it's always something about cherry blossoms whispering in the wind or some s**t... Also, I can never write them because I have no syllable control.

But I do adore this one. I love the meaning and the whole effortlessness of it. Edgar Allan Poe once said there is nothing more romantic than the death of a beautiful woman. There is something poetic in dying, isn't there, and you've brought it to light quite perfectly. Really am quite fond of this. 100/100

Posted 9 Years Ago

tess

Love Haiku's! This is so true.. we do come closer and closer to death it's just a matter of when and where! Please write more! This is so lovely!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on December 4, 2014
Last Updated on December 4, 2014
Tags: Life, death, haiku, poem, poetic

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