Naïve
A Poem by Inkh(e)art
She
flirted with death Fearing
no harm But
death fell in love
And
she in his arms
© 2017 Inkh(e)art
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One stanza, four lines, a powerful message. I am so intrigued by this poem! I would suggest doing a part two and writing a full length story based off this poem, I would read the heck out of it! I LOVE IT! Keep it up!
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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6 Years Ago
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :) and I'll take your suggestion into consideration. I hadn.. read moreThank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :) and I'll take your suggestion into consideration. I hadn't thought of it before, but it might be fun to write a longer version
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(Too powerful for words!)
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Aaaw thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!
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Short and power packed. Excellent write
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thank you so much!
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Aaaaah....so painful.....it entered deep in my heart...
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thank you! I'm glad my poetry touched you
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6 Years Ago
It was my pleasure reading your works....I am glad I came across them ☺
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Added on June 9, 2017
Last Updated on June 9, 2017
Tags: death, poetry
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