To A Great Friend

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Hiya,

Let me tell you about my awesome friend Jeremiah,

He's been to Mars,

He loves cars,

He won the American Idol with just a smile,

He has an amazing sense of style,

He's such a tough guy,

He makes onions cry,

And he's a great friend,

I hope you all have a great weekend. :D

Reviews

[Sally Hope]

LOL. This made my day. Perfect ode to a perfect friend ^_^

[Matthew James Ginn]

This has an interesting tone. Its good and great that you would like to honor him in such a way that the metaphorical representations of a archetypal boy wonder can be. The rhyme scheme could be a little more smooth to go along with the syntax. Incorporate descriptions that really touch into the five sense so that the reader can be able to get to know him to hypothetically of course. Also watch the use of commas. There is a thing called poetic justice but there has to be a need for it. overall, nice job

[Dead]

lol thanks

[Jerryyoung1z]

Hahaha lol I'm. . . .I'M speechless

[Dead]

*giggles* ur welcome