Lights out

Short story 6-10 words

Door opens

                eyes close
 
                               her light
          
                                            goes
                
                                                      out.


                   

Author's Note

Speaks for itself. Please be honest and if you cannot then please be kind

Reviews

[Tasha]

This definitely made me anxious, you did a very good job.

[pinkasylum]

It stops my heart, I dont know what to, it brings sudden death to mind. Brutal ..

[Raspberry Rebel]

Is it me, but this made me feel anxious...for some reason it made me think of someone trusting another...for them to be their killer.
Good luck with this shorty

[Daytonight]

Well done as always. Love the form. Keep on penning.

[Ruth]

It does and I like it a lot! Sometimes words need to have short form! Brings the message home harder :) xx

[Becky C Strukamp]

Not sure why but this one really reached out and touched me. Anxious for more!