Impassioned Breaths

Impassioned Breaths

A Poem by Inyourshadow
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Just the ache of missing the toc to your tic

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My heart aches in rainbow hues
from midnight black to azure blues
and all my love because of you

and the time we spend apart.


My soul screams impassioned breaths
and dies each day a thousand deaths
and tears the fabric and the wefts

of the dream we've yet to start.


My lips parched with solemn plea
the need, the want, to be set free
and draw you close to feel of me

the soft beating of my heart.


© 2011 Inyourshadow


Author's Note

Inyourshadow
Sometimes it does not make us stronger, just lonelier.

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I know that feeling all to well...Night times tend to be the worst...That kind of loneliness never really goes.
This is so beautifully done...this definitely has the sigh factor...breathtaking. xxxtifully done...this definitely has the sigh factor...breathtaking. xxx

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very well done, I loved this piece from start to finish. Your work just keeps getting better each time I pay a visit! That is what keeps me coming back time and again.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is breath-taking! I love your descriptions. Love the missing the toc to your tic too! Keep up the amazing writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 1, 2011
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Inyourshadow
Inyourshadow

United Kingdom



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I am trying to broaden my abilities as a writer, hoping to learn new styles and ways to express myself. I am married with 4 kids and a beautiful grandson, plus my two wonderful yorkshire terriers T.. more..

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