Zombie

how i'm feeling right now at 5:30 in the morning and after writing all night. yeah those of you that do this know exactly how i'm feeling

My eyes sting behind my glasses. 

Taking them off the pain will stop, 

however my words become mere masses.

My works at my hands threaten to drop.

Rhyming and spelling suffer the most. 

My mind now dull and mush. 

Now the feeling every time I post

feels I need another push

just to get the motivation to write.

my head no longer hurts but feels dead

working still with so dim a light 

looking over to he comfort of my bed 

for its the place I want to go and lay my head

but i cannot leave till I have finished what i have said. 

so here i remain typing away 

constantly writing without delay 

My mind by now far gone 

forgetting the topic i am on

Fighting now each dreary blink

having my eyelids each time sink

a little lower and now I see

this late night writing will be the end of me 

Author's Note

um yeah. any further questions just read the poem

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

ahh~ the nocturnal writer going round about the carousel of the mind~ I like the random spin about~ the descriptive interlude between waking and sleeping is well drawn~

[H-Jonesy]

I know the feeling of being up all night and typing, and then wanting to go sleep but you just have to finish writing.
This made smile actually. Nicely done