I will protect you

A 4 year old poem I thought I would test the quality of.

I fell

As I have Fallen many times before

Many times, I tried to make things right

but in the end it's for nothing

why am I crawling back to you

I could hear the echoes

of many people screaming

trust me as I fall

just trust me as I fall to my fears

No matter what happens

just listen to me

even if you can't see

I'll walk you to it...

The shadows of my past

tries to survive in my light

these echoes from my voice are

forgotten...

As I fall deep into this vast ocean

I'm falling deeper into the waves

each mistake I make

I promise I'll get back up

no matter how many enemies

I promise I'll get back up

I promise I won't succumb to failure

no matter how hard I fall

I will protect you!

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[Unspoken poet]

As I fall deep into this vast ocean
I'm falling deeper into the waves
each mistake I make
I promise I'll get back up
no matter how many enemies
I promise I'll get back up
I promise I won't succumb to failure

no matter how hard I fall
I will protect you!

I love this write, This is so good and so emotional. SO very well written as well.