Higher Consciosness

Awakened by life's gasping breath
Only to again, fall into sweet death
My slumber brings me to the essence of you
Astounding energy pouring through
Watching me are the windows to your soul
Heart's pounding curiosity untold
Fitting together, our minds a story
Foresees what could be mysterious glory
To one another, we speak secret whispers
Drowning prying eyes of curious listeners
Your shell's eminating heat

Enveloping mine, welcoming defeat
Rapturing me, your desire takes me
Avoiding hesitation, my spirit is free
The constant call of oneness divine
Until solidity makes you the reality of my mind

Reviews

[Michael X]

this is a magnificent poem imo, because its clean, refined, grammatically
inviting, speaks of mysteries and wonders, desires, whispers and secrets
and the anticipation builds to these lines, i could feel the sense of rapture
"Your shell's eminating heat-Enveloping mine, welcoming defeat-Rapturing me,

you also structure the form with an internal rhyme scheme, gives the
flow a classic touch and talent woven through & through,
the title defines the meaning, the overall perspective is of a dream
and a lover, and souls in flight, amazing work here. loved this