Message

The wind carries the touch
Of sweet compassion and love

Whispering secrets
Against my lips

Soft, fresh and brisk
Green blades of grass

Dancing all around me
Laying in the calmness

Playful display
Teasing my senses

He dances around me
Without having to display his feathers

Reviews

[Michael X]

simply awsome, i loved the way you basically painted this poem,
each word a color- an image, the meaning is simplicity and metaphor
combined in such a way, that end in end the reader is left to ponder
this messege as well as the skill applied to creat such a well
rounded execution. wonderful job here, i loved this.