The Day of Trouble

The Day of Trouble

A Poem by John the Baptist
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A meditation on adversity

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It may come on slowly,
Like a siege of hostile
Weather drifting in off
The sea,
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Or as a lightning strike
Thrusting suddenly from
A cloudless sky.
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Either way, it separates
What was from what is,
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So that they seem to be
Two lives, one of which
Has gone astray,
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But the day of trouble is
A transient who tries the
Soul before departing,
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So do not falter, neither
Be afraid in the midst of it,
For at a certain point
Within you, it will fall away,
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And you will recall it
Only as the pathway
That led you to that
Silent space.

© 2023 John the Baptist


Author's Note

John the Baptist
When beset by troubles, be still and rise to that highest point within you.

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The storms make us stronger. All things pass. When the going gets tough, grit your teeth and know it won’t last. Your author’s note is sound advice John.

Chris

Posted 5 Months Ago


John the Baptist

5 Months Ago

Thanks,Chris. Looking back on my life and those of others, I have found that inner struggle accompli.. read more
Indeed, every storm within or without will inevitably lead to a stronger, calmer self and had we not known the storm, never been in its vortex, we'd never know how to fight it and emerge stronger. After every great tribulation, trivialities of life stop to matter, more and more. Only the deeper and more abiding retains its pull.

Loved this meditation today. It helped me to think better over my own present situation.

Posted 5 Months Ago


John the Baptist

5 Months Ago

Thanks, D. Your telling me it helped has made my day.
I really like how this one grows, right up to the ending in silence.
It is true that each thing sent to test us can end up feeling so personal, that it is easy to think the worst, that we are jinxed and give up, yet we can all look back on times of adversity and I'm sure most people think they get more than their fair share of adversity, but we can also stand up to it and when we do, we sometimes realise it was only there to challenge us all along.
And yes, I agree that silence is the best prize too! 😊

Posted 5 Months Ago


John the Baptist

5 Months Ago

Thanks, Lorry. You get my drift. If we regard adversity as some sort of personal affront, then any p.. read more
the older I get, the more I shrink, making that highest point within me, that much easier to reach
Just one more blessing to count, at least on those days when I can still remember how to count

Posted 5 Months Ago


John the Baptist

5 Months Ago

I don't count anymore. Computer got me out of practice.
This is good. When my troubles come, they usually come in terms of weeks or even months-how I wish I could have just one day of troubles.

Posted 5 Months Ago


John the Baptist

5 Months Ago

Thanks. I agree. It would be so nice if your troubles just let you sign off at the end of the day an.. read more
Sage advice between these lines. Often troubles get us so down that we can't see how to get past them, yet we always do. We find a way to persevere and get through to the other side as a stronger person.

Posted 5 Months Ago


John the Baptist

5 Months Ago

Or as the saying goes, what doesn't kill you makes you stronger. Thanks.
Vibrantly imaged, poetically advising. Uplifting.
Great read and write

With love,

Matthew

Posted 5 Months Ago


John the Baptist

5 Months Ago

Thanks. Glad you noted the uplifting part. That was the purpose of the work.
Hi how are you?? John. .

Posted 5 Months Ago


JessyJacob

5 Months Ago

Trouble days are gone just getting better. How about you.
John the Baptist

5 Months Ago

Had some trouble with my computer, but things are ok now.
JessyJacob

5 Months Ago

Ok. Hope everything goes smoothly.

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Added on November 29, 2023
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John the Baptist
John the Baptist

Suffolk, VA, United States Minor Outlying Islands



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I am a 78 year old retired human services worker. During my career I saw much human suffering. My writing is geared toward easing that suffering. more..

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