Asked & Answered~224

Asked & Answered~224

A Story by JD Major
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The Pickup Artist, at the Supermarket ...in 12 lines

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The Pickup Artist
-at the Supermarket-
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He spots her in Produce fondling a Romaine head.
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Gearing his cart into Neutral, he waits.
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She nestles the lettuce in her basket, strolls on.
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He shifts into first and follows at a distance.
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In Salad Dressings she adds a jar of Caesar and checks her raven hair 
on her mirror app. In Dairy she selects a Mozzarella packet.
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Caressing a French loaf in Bakery, she breathes in its aroma
and stands it up, snug between the Romaine and cheese.
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Nearing Wines his pulse quickens as she picks up two whites
and scans the labels.
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He gears into Park. Showtime. Silently rehearsing his line, he steps forward.
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"Chablis or Chardonnay?" she asks him, turning.
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© 2024 JD Major


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Funny. He never realized who was the pickor and who was the pickee.

Posted 1 Week Ago


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JD Major

1 Week Ago

Thanks JB, exactly right.
...and then they popped their chardonnay ;)

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JD Major
JD Major

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