her Mohawk rocks!

a very bad hair day . . .

 

 

Author's Note

a non-tanka

Graphics credit: Google Images

Reviews

[ba_mcfarlane]

Wonderful, and the sketch is perfect as your inspiration. The words have me smiling!

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thanks, Brian. Another oldie, but one I always liked. The sketch is the best! The attitude of that girl just screams, "You tyrant, don't you dare tell me what to do!"

[Angi]

Ha! Oh man. My 13 year old daughter wants to dye her locks shocking colors. Oh my. Where is the wine? Ha! Nicely done. (I am praying for NO mohawks) Angi~

[Joyce S. Greene]

I hope your prayers are answered, Angi. I can't imagine looking at my child and seeing that he or she had completely destroyed their looks, of course, they wouldn't agree at all! Just have to grin and bear it, I guess. Thanks for letting me know your thoughts on this one. It means a lot to me.

[Rita L. Sev]

Oh, the hairstyles that make us bite our tongues! Witty - I am still grinning at this one, Joyce!

[Joyce S. Greene]

Glad this one made you smile, Rita. I used to write a a lot of funny tanka until the editor of "Ribbons" (the editor of the Tanka Society of America) told me in no uncertain terms that they weren't tanka. Well, nowadays, I really don't care! So there.

[Yellow Butterfly]

This poem rocks Fp.... we all have those 'bad' hair days.... lord only knows I do.... :o)

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thanks for stopping by to comment. Glad you liked it. Sometimes I want to shave all my hair off, but I know my hubby would kill me.

[Frieda P]

Hahaha, thanks for the smiles, was it brilliant orange by the way? ;-)

[Joyce S. Greene]

An imaginery Mohawk for an imaginery daughter (I only had one son), but orange is a great idea, or how about pink? Thanks for letting me know it made you smile.

[Frieda P]

Ha I have a niece that had one, and my sister nearly died, my three boys used to shave their football numbers in their head...ha my pleasure....imaginary kids are a lot less trouble!