Love it! Especially the "silver dove" image - very pretty. :) :) The word "swam" sticks out though, and is a bit distracting. I'm not sure if that's the right word, it probably is XD, but I dunno... it doesn't really sit right with me. Otherwise, very pretty poem, beautiful imagery, I loved reading this. =)
Hmm...well, I'm going to just be honest with you- love poems reallly aren't my thing, so I have NOO idea what to look for in them.
As far as I'm concerned, this is good, and as long as as you think that you did a good job 'conveying your feelings', than it is great.
Good job, I guess.
Well said?
P.S. I can definitely complement the imagery, for sure.
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