Dumbest B***h Alive

Hm.

She places the blame on the world

She spins heads like their tops

She crushed hearts under her boots

She grinds the knife til it stops

 

She draws blood in her nails

she sees destruction in her eyes

she wants turmoil in her wake

she fears life's surprise

But what she dosn't know

is that she's vulnerable

that every step she takes

is really three steps back

shes immature

uncomfortable

ridiculous

meticulous

hateful

ungrateful

shes weak

and her strength is all fake

a mistake

 

she's bitter and Empty

Takes pride in her envy

self-righteous a, dive

The dumbest b***h alive.

 

She won't comprehend that the failure is she

Teh dumbest B***h alive

Is None other than me.

Reviews

[PerfectFlaw90]

Sometimes the best poetry is the one that is written about and for ourselves. You must have really done some self-examination and reflection to write this with so much detail. I really like it. The honesty really moves the flow along. But just remember for every negative trait, there's a positive one (at least with most people). Keep up the good work!

[bluessadmood]

oh thats nice and all the time you are talking about yourself ,you should not be so hard and cruel on yourself...
She places the blame on the world
She spins heads like their tops
She crushed hearts under her boots
She grinds the knife til it stops
she fears life's surprise
is that she's vulnerable
her strength fake a mistake
she is so dumb
i know how life can be so tough at times but you should not feel so bad and and so hard on you,this is written with strong emotions and much rage ,but its really exciting and captivating,i liked it a lot