Gravity

A Matter of Balance.

 

Shaded beneath stone;

It falls over onto me;

Ouch! The hurt, I groan.

Reviews

[Gary H]

Haven't read one of these for ages. Very good. I've just been watching Apocalypse Now and have thought of a better end 'Ouch, the hurt, I groan' as in Marlon Brando's 'the horror, the horror' at the films end.

[emmajoy]

I love it! What a great performance for a tiny chap of a poem! Thanks for sharing this, it's a great finish to my day. Take care. :-)

[Craig Bates]

Hahah
short, simple, sweet
made me smile to myself
could you ask for much more?
Thanks for the read