ET (re-written)

ET (re-written)

A Poem by Jeremy Price
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Extraterrestrial by Katy Perry. Lyrics re-written by me reflecting a very negative relationship instead of the positive message she is conveying in the actual song..

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(Verse 1)
You're so condescending
I think you're the devil
No way you're an angel

You're games how you played me
Watching our love fleeting
Broken heart is bleeding

They say you're a fake
You're just like the others
Superficial lover

Trust that you betrayed
Now I understand you

(Interlude)
You're just destroying my world
A heartless deception
I've opened my eyes
And I'm finally free
Want you out of my life

(Chorus)
Left me, L-L-Left me
Affected from your lying
Filled my heart with poison

Break free, B-B-Break free
Don't wanna be your victim
Slave to your seduction

Girl, you are living sin
Your touch like venom
It's time to let you go
Ex-girl-I-used-to-know

(Verse 2)
You're so hypocritic
Looking like a flower
Stung me like a coward

Your kiss is toxic
Loving you is tragic

(Interlude)
You're just destroying my world
A heartless deception
I've opened my eyes
And I'm finally free
Want you out of my life

(Chorus)
Left me, L-L-Left me
Affected from your lying
Filled my heart with poison

Break free, B-B-Break free
Don't wanna be your victim
Slave to your seduction

Girl, you are living sin
Your touch like venom
It's time to let you go
Ex-girl-I-used-to-know

(Break)
Wasn't accidental
I was incidental
Girl, you tore out my heart

I wanted love, living on faith
And be there for you always
For you, I lost it all
All

(Chorus)
Left me, L-L-Left me
Affected from your lying
Filled my heart with poison

Break free, B-B-Break free
Don't wanna be your victim
Slave to your seduction

Girl, you are living sin
Your touch like venom
It's time to let you go
Ex-girl-I-used-to-know

Ex-girl-I-used-to-know

Ex-girl-I-used-to-know

Girl, you are living sin
Your touch like venom
It's time to let you go
Ex-girl-I-used-to-know

© 2011 Jeremy Price


Author's Note

Jeremy Price
If you haven't memorized the original lyrics, you'll notice the similar wording, certain syllables and antonyms used more if you listen to the song while reading along.

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Added on May 31, 2011
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Jeremy Price
Jeremy Price

Columbus, OH



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