Watery Waves

I felt like being at the ocean today and this is what i came up with .

Watery Waves

 

Sitting here in the sand next to the watery blue ocean

My eyes gaze upon the glittering waves

A time when my body connects with the pure warm love from the sky

I hold faith in these waters to release me from the world

I feel the peaceful breeze relaxing upon my skin

Cooling, Relaxing, Brilliant vibrations created to ease my anxiety

Each moment of its being blossoms thoughts of clarity

 

During the crescent moon nights

A gathering of stars reflect upon its tranquil face

Glistening as it showers everyone with tears of happiness

The moon waves passionately in the distance

Flowing into the vastness of deep space

The ocean blue sings its faithful song

As it grains against the sand

 

I hear something?

She speaks softly:

 

"I love you"

"Everyone is apart of me”

“I am apart of everyone as well"

"Just listen to me”

"Become one with me”

"And I will set you free"

"Swim gracefully"

"Drink me"

"Drown your heart with my love"

 

 

Reviews

[Tsuki Usagi]

I love the flow of words in this poem expressing the nature of the ocean. Even though i have never personally seen the ocean, I feel as if I'm connected to it through this poem. Great work!

[Mistral Bilgera]

when we really admire nature, it will come to life deep in us, seem to dwell with us, speak to us and love us back. :)

this is the best power of nature, and i believe it is captured in this poem. great work, Jamaal! :)

[Sarah]

Aw, this was really cute! I love the description in the beginning and the dialogue to end it - definitely made the end very intense. (: This is a similar feeling that I experience upon visiting the ocean - that it has such power over everything and can so easily set me free. Great job capturing that! (: