Rocket Ships

A Poem by Joshua Carl Cruz

the sun gleamed elegant as diamonds

reflecting jewels off their metal hides.

their giant silver plated carcasses will,

once built, take to the night skies!

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I don't know what I can help you with... you win awards dude...it is supposed to rhyme though.

hides and skies, diamands and carcasses but i know carcass doesnt quite hit with diamond. f**k. what.. read more

Cheat...as long as it ends in nd...like mind,for example.

ha! didnt even think of that...

This is beautifully written. I love it.

hey cat! thnx bunches. anything you need me to read just ask and ye shall receive.

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Added on August 12, 2015
Last Updated on July 26, 2017

I've been working at figuring out what writing means to me. So far, it means just that, writing. A lot of it. more..

unfinished

late night