Too Structured

Too Structured

A Poem by Jacob Nimble
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You may have noticed I prefer flowing verse to tense verse. For me this poem was obnoxiously structured.

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I’m nobody at all

I’m just a shadow on the wall

a reflection from the mirrors in your mind


I may just rearrange

or make myself quite strange

but your concepts are my full and truest bind


so if you think I’m grand

take a sec to still your hand

for my body may not be the one you find


if you see what I mean

then you know I’m what you’ve seen

but I’m also something more or less unkind


and if you don’t think so

well that shows what I know

and why none of these here pages are re-lined.

© 2016 Jacob Nimble


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