Forgotten

Forgotten

A Book by Jackson Keller
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After the world ends, Chris Underwood travels across the continental United States to reunite with his best friend and one true love, Kelly, battling the undead and coming to terms with his mistakes.

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© 2011 Jackson Keller


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Jackson Keller
This is essentially the rough draft of the book I hope to get published. Considering I'm poor as hell and therefore can't afford an editor, I want you to pick it apart. Tell me what was good, but more importantly, tell me what sucked. Grammar, characters, word choice, descriptions, inconsistencies, etc. I mean anything and everything.

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Wow. This was really good. I was pulled through the whole story the entire time, I didn't want to stop reading. There were some grammar and spelling errors in a few places, but nothing bad. Some things are a little repetitive in the last chapter, like redescribing the lunchroom scene once Kelly is there. Also, the scene about Chris in Miami and the s****y apartment was a little boring, maybe spice it up a bit. But you should definitely write more. I'm excited to see what happens and how everything falls into place.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Wow. This was really good. I was pulled through the whole story the entire time, I didn't want to stop reading. There were some grammar and spelling errors in a few places, but nothing bad. Some things are a little repetitive in the last chapter, like redescribing the lunchroom scene once Kelly is there. Also, the scene about Chris in Miami and the s****y apartment was a little boring, maybe spice it up a bit. But you should definitely write more. I'm excited to see what happens and how everything falls into place.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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