We are one.

We're hand in hand,

Face to face,

Chest against chest.

Heartbeat to heartbeat.

My body, your body.

We are one.

Reviews

[SlightlyOdd]

hmmmm it's sweet and simple

[stars are far]

sweet poem .. this held many burning :P feelings..
so nice :D

[Angelic Surrender]

Simple, and beautiful. Great work. I like it :)

[patricia]

nice sentiments...i liked the simplicity and warmth in this. Thankyou.

[Perfect Mistake]

short but gets the point through. Good job

[Suze]

Very simple, very to the point.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed, the lucky are.

[Vestigial Appendage]

I had wondered it if was about kissing in the first line, the second line realized that vision, and then came the third line! Such minimalistic, but well wrought passions, perfect for the purring world, gently swaying as one. Bravo! Write more on lhw topic, I anticipate it fully.

[jennifer little]

great poem good job keep up the good work ......

[AK]

Short, precise and straight to the point. But I must say the idea and the wordings are really cliché