I’m in you

The feeling you have when miss your bff who is far away from you and you want tell him/her not to miss you because you both are single soul in different bodies…….

Look at yourself,
I’m in your style .
Look at yourself,
I’m in your smile.
Don’t miss me,
I’m in you.

Look at the mirror,
I’m in your eyes.
Look at your watch,
I’m in that time.
Don’t miss me,
I’m in you.

You need not to wait for me ,
I’m your time.
Just focus on the journey,
I’m your ride.
Don’t miss me,
I’m in you.

Look around yourself,
I’m everywhere.
Look towards the sky,
I’m anywhere there.
Don’t miss me,
I’m in you.

Look your beautiful heart,
I’m your soul.
Pay attention to your present,
Cheering for you I’m in your future.
Don’t miss me,
I’m in you.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems and please show your love towards my hard work 💜

Reviews

[Neville]

seriously sad in a most beautiful way .. I am glad I found these words today .. Neville

[JENNY]

Thanks for your valuable review my dear friend. Wishing you beautiful life ahead .

[Neville]

and back at you too JENNY :)

[Addy]

I like the poem. It has a good flow to it. Well written! You can really feel the emotion behind your words.

[JENNY]

Thanks for your valuable remark my friend.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Ah, this is a beautiful poem. Encouraging, heartfelt and poetic. "Look at your watch, I'm in that time." Tyfs enjoyed this read.

[JENNY]

Thank you my friend for your enthusiastic review. I’m glad that you liked it . Have a great day

[Ken Simm.]

Such a sad ,introspective and beautifully constructed piece. The flow is exceptonal.

[JENNY]

Thank you so much Ken Simm. for precious words . I really appreciate you for stopping by to review.

[DIVYA]

A beautiful, inward looking poem. Yes, we all must have that inner faith and confidence in ourselves. We are never alone if we still have our own soul for company. I appreciate your words so much JENNY. Very well written.

[JENNY]

It’s a new dimension of thought I could think of. Thanks my friend for your innovative review.

[DIVYA]

You are welcome dear Jenny.

[Soren]

I share this feeling so wonderfully expressed in a manner that I had not heard before. Nicely done

[JENNY]

Thanks Soren for your precious review

[Pauline]

Separation from someone close to you can be difficult, but as you kindly say, don't feel too sad because you're always in my heart. Beautiful words from a loving heart. Well done Jenny.

Pauline.

[JENNY]

Thanks Pauline for appreciating.I’m glad to read your review.

[Pauline]

You're welcome.

[willweb]

I love everything about this. The concept and theme are perfect and something I wish I had thought of. Really nice

[JENNY]

Thanks Willweb . I grateful to your words.

[Mk.t.g]

Wonderfully composed, Jenny! Loved this.

[JENNY]

Thanks Mk.t.g for stopping by to give this wonderful review .
May you have beautiful days ahead.

[Mk.t.g]

You're Welcome, Jenny! You deserve this, as you are a wonderful writer.

[Chris Shaw]

Separation from loved ones is difficult. Living so far apart can bring on sad feelings. The writer here is trying to soften that sadness by saying to her loved ones, don't miss her because you carry her inside your heart. Thank you for sharing Jenny.

Chris

[JENNY]

Thank you Chris for giving your precious time to understand the feeling I wanna convey . Hope you have great days ahead.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Jenny and I wish you well also :)