Let's Take A Deep Conversation

Have you ever get worried that you might lost someone important to you? After all the things you spend to that person?

Let's take a deep conversation

calling both of our hearts in one situation

listening and speaking to each others realizations

as the trees sways like a blow of air

I cry in front of you weeping and unaware

Let's take a deep conversation

You and me, making calculations

thinking if we can answer and make a solutions 

To you who gives me answer  

To you who gives me questions

and to you who is now part of the story of my deep emotions.

Author's Note

This like a free verse poetry but does rhyme at least. Hope u like it.

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

This poem speaks to the true depth of love and how we must make ourselves vulnerable to the other. This is how we build trust in relationships, surrendering to others, and showing weakness (and expecting the same). I think you’ve captured the essence of love in few fine verses. Well written.

[Pastel.Jae1251]

thank you ! I really appreciate that you have read my poem, thank you for your review it means a lot ^^

[R.E. Ray]

You’re welcome.

[Mark]

I wonder how much of this need to be part of a couple is intrinsic, and how much is cultural. For most of human history the idea of True Love was mostly a myth. Now we are bombarded with it daily, and it can make us sometimes desperate, and sometimes unfulfilled. I liked reading this, keep writing. Maybe take an English class though. Your grammar needs a little work :)