My Questions

My Questions

A Poem by Phoenix
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This could fit many things

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Why do you have to be so elusive

Why do you cause so much destruction

Why do you push and pull at our lives

Why do you create all these obstructions?

Whose mind do you grab

Whose heart do you shake

Whose arm do you twist

Whose soul is at stake?

What makes you seize each victim

What makes them fall to your trap

What do some have that protects them

What is it that makes others go slack?

Where does that leave me

Where does that leave us

Where can anyone go

Where do we put our trust?

 

 

© 2010 Phoenix


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It's all about love. I like it. I thought that "What is it that makes others go slack?" could have flowed better without the "go", and the who parts so brought to mind that country classic "whose bed have your boots been under", but that is just my sporadic mind making connections of an abstract nature. It is excellently spaced, the flow works well and the ending is so pointed. It is a superb piece of writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great Questions here. Well, this world have so many unanswered Question. It very sad to ask question wil no replies, nice written!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Phoenix
Phoenix

Zushi, Japan



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