You and Me, it's a Fallacy

You and Me, it's a Fallacy

A Poem by Phoenix
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Written months ago, then removed. Inspired by a lesson on logical fallacies in philosophy class.

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Love me or hate me, I’m no in between

You have to choose, please do

Just to end my suffering.

 

I’m feeling so down, but so is everyone

As broken now as ever before

Time has proven this can’t be undone.

 

You tell me to believe, but you don’t know

You have no right to reasoning

I’ll grow wild if you’re not listening.

 

Don’t leave me now in this loneliness

All this pain, it just won’t end

I can’t survive in constant distress.

 

I should give up, stop the fight

But that’s no surprise

Nothing in life ever goes right.

 

This is your fault, look at what you’ve done

Now no one’s good enough for me

And I'm not good enough for anyone.

© 2012 Phoenix


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descriptive storyline with va commonly stressing idea and especially philosiphy. great job!

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Added on July 22, 2011
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Phoenix
Phoenix

Zushi, Japan



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