Lost thoughts

A moment of hard time.

The harder the fall, the higher the bounce, God won't let failure be announced, no matter how terrible my human nature my seem or sound, the ALMighty King above never fails to always shower me with love.

Last year, I tripped, stumbled and fell feeling like I was living a reality of hell, not knowing if ill ever make it out of that personal caged cell. But God assured me this year everything will be swell!

PS: Sometimes when I can't sleep my thoughts are in rhymes, it gets annoying at times. But I should probably get some sleep so I won't wake up in the morning cranky like a beep beep.

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

is it kinda funny, though? well, certainly not... but the way you let out, or possibly just "beep out" the dexture of your current state of mind in... so jittery words is kinda way fascinating. with the proper beat of ur rhyme, it's so okay to read out ur thoughts. quite interesting. nicely written!

[Pete]

A great show of faith to get you through. So very true & nicely done.

[JainieJane]

thank you, appreciate your comment.

[Polly]

Haha, this poem was so different and relatable at the same time. I love how optimistic your thoughts were in this poem. Great work. :)

[JainieJane]

why thank you!

[Polly]

No problem. :)