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Um, it's weird.

Little gremlins,

sticky hands,

itchy eyes

and bleeding glands.

"Tear it out!"

The ostrich cried.

But, alas,

the whisper died. 

Reviews

[Rambling Prose]

It very well may be weird, but I love the lighthearted cheerfulness it evoked within me! The title couldn't be more fitting! After all, it is nonsensical rubbish - adorable rubbish to boot!

~loved it~

[Legion]

Definetly weird, but I like it. Has a "punch" to it I find interesting. Maybe something the Beatles would have done.

[J-Boo]

Eeeeek, I love it!

Ostriches freak me out. Almost as much as emus...

[Carla (trying to make e..]

Yes...it is weird but makes you think what is really happening in that little mind of yours.

Carla

[Ed Rector]

interesting poem... abstract but i enjoyed it non the less