Seek the Wind

Seek the Wind

A Poem by James Mayfield
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A favorite of mine.

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A sweet breeze carresses
The soft cheek of a loved one

A kiss
Light and fresh
Tender as a mothers embrace
Powerful as a fathers word
Holding all the love and meaning
Of a hopeless romantic

A kiss
Speaking louder than words ever could
Healing wounds of a torn soul
Igniting passions of a lonely heart

The breeze moves on
Leaving a longing and sense of loss
And drying a single tear
 

© 2008 James Mayfield


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sweet poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is sublime, yearning and soft ... almost like being caught in the centre of a gently breeze over the Atlantic.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

at the last paragraph are you suggesting that the person is leaving someone?
i really liked this. i liked how you said a kiss...holding all the love and meaning. that can be so true. great poem! i can see why it would be one of your favorites.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice concept of a kiss. I love the feeling and depth of this piece. It is very heartfelt and uplifting. Thank you for your entry into the Any and All Poetry Contest. You have again made it into the first cut of finalists.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Exquisitely written.......very, very nice work :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very passionate and moving. Ah, if my husband could write as you do...
This is one of my favorites and I'll be adding you to my library. Beautifully written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Beuatiful. I am going to add this to my favorites. A lovely start to repopulating my library. Well done! Brenda

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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James Mayfield
James Mayfield

Clarksville, TN



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I am tired of the usual drivel that I have here. Yes, I was writing in High School. I was apparently doing a decent job as I was sent to a workshop hosted by Brescia College. Most of my works from .. more..

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