Night shift sanity

Free flow of the mind, produced by years of something lived. Short yet meaningless.

One glance into insanity

Order not to be accepted

Organisms failed

Who would believe

What is left to abuse

Wandering negativity

Author's Note

I know my limitations

Reviews

[EssenceofDaringx]

None of your work is meaningless. Obviously it meant enough to you to type it up and share it on this site. This poem is vague enough to leave room for interpretation, so I hope you don't mind me giving you mine. After reading it a couple of times I thought this poem spoke about the relationship between mankind and earth and all of the organisms on her. Though there is a natural order to the world, right now it seems to be in chaos as she suffers from the abuse of her environment and the mistreatment of her organisms. What else do we have to destroy? Not entirely sure what my interpretation has to do with your title, but I figured I could always figure that out later. Anyway, thanks for sharing! I'll be sure to add you as a friend and don't hesitate to leave a review on any of my works as well! Ta ta for now.

[Jim]

Hello, and thank you very much for you review.
Your interpretation is very close to the reality.
In fact, it tells about my state of mind and I live in a very close relationship with nature and I have alot more trust with animals than men.

I wanted the first one to be brief and I intend to make longer stories and poems as I progress. I have been writing for 20 years for myself and this is the first time I share my writings online, I'll read your writings soon. Bye!

[EssenceofDaringx]

Oh, well I'm glad I have good instincts then. Any form of art is personal, so you are very brave to share it online. I hope to see more from and of you!