A Little Space, Please.

Every man can relate...and some women, I'm sure.

It was only a little awkward

When his elbows brushed mine

Not quite as uncomfortable

As when his foot scuffed the shine

Of my newly buffed left shoe

But when he glanced at me

Over the short, black divider

I knew

That there was not nearly enough

Space between the urinals.

Reviews

[Ana Papaya]

Ha! I cannot related because I'm usually behind a closed door. I don't envy you guys this...

[...]

Lol...grateful for not knowing EVER! Great piece James. Starz

[Kelly Scheppers]

I've often wondered why we ladies have such privacy. Great thought process, James!

[barleygirl]

I would rather piss on a tree, barely concealed from public view, than to be in this situation!!!!! No wonder my little nephews always preferred to whip it out any old place, rather than use the restrooms during our family camping trips! *wink! wink!* Nice job of slowly getting to the point as we feel the squeeze getting tighter line by line.

[Beccy]

Hilarious! Glad we females don't have the same problem.

Beccy.

[Tony Jordan]

Certainly the women who brought the 'Shewee's' to the various music festivals this year would relate !
I love the 'reveal' - so to speak - at the end.
No pee came out but plenty of chuckles James.
:)

[James]

I'm glad you were able to hold it in:) It was a very uncomfortable moment.

[Tony Jordan]

Haha
I like the urinals in this - they're much better than the old porcelain trough types where we ended up carrying other guys DNA home on the front of our brogues.

[Ana Papaya]

Lol. :)
I will never know what that's like. :)

[James]

Standing we pee, isn't always all it's cracked up to be.

[Ana Papaya]

: )

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ooo yes, awkward...

had to smile at the scuff thing...made me think of " for a few dollars more" and the scene in the street just before lee van cleef and clint started shooting each other's hats.

thanks for the smile, James.
j.

[James]

I know that scene well. I'm a spaghetti western fan and that is a favorite. Love those early Eastwood westerns.