CLOUD 9...

CLOUD 9...

I am definitely love struck,
I'm not even trying to pass the buck,

When I saw her love coming my way,
I tried to duck but she hit her target,
and now I'm stuck,

My head is no doubt in the clouds,
and I would be lying if I said I wasn't proud,
I feel completely blessed when she's around,
my girl is the epitome of being down,

So as we chill on cloud 9 and spend some,
quality time, kissing & hugging and hitting,
rewind, we indulge in our frenzy for one another,
growing closer playing the game of discover,

My heart is in a state of heavenly bliss,
the more & more we chill and kiss,

I want this trance to last forever,
I want her to be with me in all of my endeavors,
when we are together my life just feels better,
this is a tie I must be careful not to severe,

If it feels this good being with her and having my,
head stuck in the clouds, please God let me stay
on cloud 9, I don't ever want to come down...

Author's Note

GOD IS GOOD!!!
Just having fun, hope you enjoy:)

Reviews

[Lord_Shade]

This is an awesome piece. I could picture it clearly in my head. Thank you for sharing.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[AaronFreitas]

"My heart is in a state of heavenly bliss,
the more & more we chill and kiss, "

You said that perfectly my friend! Awesome work... beautiful write!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Very good, James, love is always good. Thank you for sharing. :) Rudi

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Fran Marie]

Love has lifted you up..your joy and happiness shines through in this poem...good One

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

:) I love this, simply dreamy and caressing ....wish i'd be on that cloud as well...
Fantastic write!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your review, b-blessed!

[Deepika]

A very sweet poem james :) I enjoyed reading it!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out, I appreciate your review:)
Hope all is well with you and yours.

[Deepika]

Yep..I'm good :) Tight schedule these days..WC is refreshing :)

[Jamestown]

I can certainly understand that:)

[R Smith]

Nice one James, hope you are living this, it makes you soar and rhyme to perfection, great writing my friend :)

[Jamestown]

Not yet, but all in due time:)
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
no intelligent person can climb down from there...........
Love is the most beautiful gift to humanity............
amazing sweet romantic write........
i loved it!!!
:)

[Jamestown]

I agree friend:)
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome............!!! :) :)

[Melinda McQueen]

Awwwwww what a sweet love poem.
On Cloud 9 is the place to be.

[Jamestown]

I agree completely!
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Dara]

Oh this was just so enjoyable! Your happiness is contagious. Thank you for spreading it around :-)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!