Death beckons

A poem written specifically for a contest "Describe death in no more than ten words"

Death beckons

  

  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Angels call

Death beckons

Off to heaven

God is waiting..

Author's Note

A poem written specifically for a contest "Describe death in no more than ten words"

Reviews

[RienKelsoCinema]

Nice choice of your 10 words.

"I see a light, and it shines forward. As the angels call, it's waiting for your astounding presence. Though the light moves toward infinity, do not be afraid. To not be afraid is sit up in the glory and presence inside it's unattained beauty! It's your time to come, we are all waiting!"

I don't know, I just thought I'd show you what that made me feel like.

Very nice poem!

[Ruth]

Sublime piece for the words love! xx

[M Garcia]

very good

[Mauricio Montoya]

too the point, nice.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Enough you can reduce two words, Nice conclution...

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Very good :-)

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short and sweet..

[MS. BABy]

For some this is a beautiful application....I liked the format....

[Jazique]

That is a nice simple; the object of this sad but, good. Well done on such a short poem. Keep it up.

[KAREN]

Excellent job! And so full of truth!